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I do not look at my old photos
When I see them, I notice a spark

I notice a spark in my eyes, It's small, but it's there
If I look at myself in the mirror, I see nothing
There is no spark, I have looked, and it's not there
I have lost the happiness in me, I have lost my heart
It's broken, and I hope, someone will heal it

I do not look at my old photos
Because in them I see a joy that I used to have

Oh hidden spark in my eye
Where is your hiding place?
Where have you gone?
Yeah, I lost my spark in my eye, Its coming back now ( Don't worry about me :D ) And I see that it grows ^^ But in the photos where I was younger, there is an even greater spark and I want it back, life was easier as a child :) But life can't always be easy I guess ^^

[link] Here is where I found the picture :D And when I looked I couldn't find any copyright :) It was a free for all picture I guess ^^
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AnumiaCial Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My spark is lost aswell..
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
And you will find it one day :)
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AnumiaCial Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hopefully D:
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Tatibear Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Artist
Nice poem... good job :3
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Darkthrop Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
easier as a child...:D
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Yes indeed :D
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alterego51 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Love the poem, thankyou
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Thanks for what? O.o
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alterego51 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012
The lovely poem and the eyes
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Refugnic Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah yes. I called this 'spark' 'Sternenglanz' (star glint), when I was younger. When people lost this glint, they'd have lost their soul...their essence of life...and nothing but a hollow shell remained behind.

However, even though it signals vacancy every now and then...it's still there...however, sometimes it just grows too faint for us to see...like a fading star...yet they say, that a star is at it's brightest, when it's dying. So either it has already died and is now fading into nothingness...or it is merely conserving itself...so it can shine once more, once the time has come. :)
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Indeed :D
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yanesita86 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know how you feel. I wish to find mine too. Great poem!
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
You will one day :) Give it time ^^
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yanesita86 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I hope so.
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Writer
Aw, hun you will find that spark again!
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
I know :3 It might take some time though :)
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student Writer
It's ok but when you find it it WILL be worth it!
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
True XD
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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fallrose Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
Amazing!!!!!!!
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Thanks :)
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fallrose Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Your Welcome!
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PixelPandaa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i think the spark that we have when we were young is our ignorance to the troubles of being a human.

i love what you have written.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
I do agree :D but I still want it back to be honest XD

Thanks :)
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PixelPandaa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
haha

i think we all do.
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xynpocari Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'm losing that spark right now.........
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
You must find a way to keep it alive, trust me, when it's gone, you want it more than ever :3
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caramelkarma Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
i know exACTLY what you're talking about. same thing for me only that spark was felt inside. now i nourish that spark as much as i can and it does show in my eyes. be child-like in nature. the more you know, the more you realize you know very little in comparison to what's out there.
that "hiding place" is in the heart. let it free and let it laugh. don't back down and extinguish that inner flame, or that spark, due to hesitations.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
I will see if I find it, or of someone else will have to find it for me :)
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caramelkarma Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
haha, k.
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NShippudenFan Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing...Wow.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
Thanks :D
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NShippudenFan Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks to you for writing wonderful poetry :).
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nunutoldme Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Artist
wooowww...great pics and explaination its real and true??cery like that :)
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
It's real and ture XD
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nunutoldme Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Artist
so sweet...like to hear that :)
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