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I hope you know
That every night
You're in my head

I hope you know
That I still care
And that I did was wrong

The ink is wet
As I write
On this piece of paper

For the tears
Of my sins
They won't disappear
When I wrote before I started to post, I wrote on a piece of paper. I looked at it to see if it could inspire me or if I wanted to use one of them, then I noticed on one there was a dried tear drop and the ink was very... how do you put it.... very unclear I guess and it was hard to read o.o Then I remember when I wrote it and yeah XD :D That's the story of this free vers ^^
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ArtsyVana Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student General Artist
very nice! :D 
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Thanks :D
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ArtsyVana Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Yw :)
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TheInkofmyWritingPen Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this poem. :) This is very powerful. But I will say one mistake you did.
Uh, you used the wrong 'your' on the third line. It's 'you're.' Just thought I should help just incase for the future. ^^
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
I'm glad you liked it :D
And to be honest I thought I had fixed it XD Thanks for pointing it out :)
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TheInkofmyWritingPen Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!^^
XD I'm glad I could help then.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
If there was a like button I'd like that comment :O
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TheInkofmyWritingPen Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD Ahahaha, thanks.
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
omg that is so amazing
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AubunLights Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist
I don't think I can say it any better than that, but TOO TRUE :)
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Student Writer
wow its really nice and the comment you wrote on the bottom made it even more emotional
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Darkthrop Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
.....x_x.................true.......:D
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fallrose Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!! You are very talented!!!! :aww:
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xynpocari Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ohmigod, that was wonderful!
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Pure-Amazement Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist
beautiful! :aww:
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WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love your poems so much!! :iconrainbowsqueeplz: So beautiful! :clap:
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
I'm glad that you enjoy them :D
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WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like writing poems, Any tips? ^-^
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
Not really, for me personlly poems are a way to exspress my mind, just write what you want to write and yeah :)
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WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ok :) Thank you! :happybounce:
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
It's so sad T_T But beautiful.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
Thanks :3
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
Always :3 But why so sad? D:
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
I was sad when I wrote it, then when I made this poem I got the same emotions once more :3
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
Aww... :/
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
I write best when I'm sad XD XD :3
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
Then you must be sad all the time ;) D:
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
I Guesss im neutral most of the time XD NOt happy nor sad :3 Just like... MEh XD
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AisuruTheWolf1 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
The ink is wet
As I write
On this piece of paper


You're writing on the computer, though! XD

*reads description.* Ahhhh
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
Lol XD XD
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