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I hope you know
That every night
You're in my head

I hope you know
That I still care
And that I did was wrong

The ink is wet
As I write
On this piece of paper

For the tears
Of my sins
They won't disappear
When I wrote before I started to post, I wrote on a piece of paper. I looked at it to see if it could inspire me or if I wanted to use one of them, then I noticed on one there was a dried tear drop and the ink was very... how do you put it.... very unclear I guess and it was hard to read o.o Then I remember when I wrote it and yeah XD :D That's the story of this free vers ^^
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ArtsyVana Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student General Artist
very nice! :D 
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Thanks :D
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ArtsyVana Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Yw :)
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TheInkofmyWritingPen Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this poem. :) This is very powerful. But I will say one mistake you did.
Uh, you used the wrong 'your' on the third line. It's 'you're.' Just thought I should help just incase for the future. ^^
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
I'm glad you liked it :D
And to be honest I thought I had fixed it XD Thanks for pointing it out :)
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TheInkofmyWritingPen Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!^^
XD I'm glad I could help then.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
If there was a like button I'd like that comment :O
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TheInkofmyWritingPen Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD Ahahaha, thanks.
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
omg that is so amazing
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AubunLights Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist
I don't think I can say it any better than that, but TOO TRUE :)
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