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Tear the rose apart
Let the blossom die
Tear it like you tear a heart
Fill it with your empty lies

Scream in deaths name
Cause that's what it does
Set it on fire
And as it burns laugh

The rose is your light
The rose is your dream
Still you destroy it
The virginity of pendants

The rose has its thorns
But it doesn't want to hurt you
The rose is insecure
And still it smells so sweet

The rose is a symbol
That makes us think
The rose is a hope
And it decays, In a dying world
I think this is more classical me in a way XD XD And for those who're like: OMG YOU JUST TOOK THAT IDEA FROM THE BLEEDING ROSE!!! OMG YOU HAVE NO FRESH IDEASSS!!!!! For those people I got one thing, as I mentioned in the poem, The rose is a symbol, and that's how I see it :) There are many ways you can describe something as a rose, some use a rose as a way to say the female sexual organ even XD Also for me, the rose is something untouched, something pure, but as I also said in this poem, it's decaying in a dying world :)

Personally I think this is one of the best I have written in ages :) Personally ofc XD Sorry for no posts lately, got a lot going on ftm, but I will try at least two posts each week >-< If you do not mind ofc XDD
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
that is why i love the rose so much this poem is very amazing
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Thanks :333
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
no prob ><
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WolfAiki Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
nice job dude :D
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
Thanks :3
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spielmitmir26 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think roses are definately symbolic of passion, whether sexual or life-force. Things that in society we keep trimmed back, holding back our true spirit to fit in. Its not a true life, in a way we are all decaying, held in one spot and carefully trimmed by the gardener that is the status quo. Those who grow wild are cut down, and we all long to grow higher and be free, see over the edge of the fence.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
There is a truth in what you say :) Even thought I like societies, and it helps people to, it can hold some back :)
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V-ChristsW3apon Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student
yay! :3
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
Why yay? XD
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
Why yay? XD
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:iconv-christsw3apon:
V-ChristsW3apon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student
idk XD
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SapphiraTheMongoose Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
Eh, I like violets better anyway.
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
Violets are awesome :3
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suna-chem Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow.. ^_^
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
A good wow or a bad one? :O
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suna-chem Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's definitely the good one..^_^
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
YAY:D
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:iconxiongirl:
xiongirl Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student Writer
very very beautiful poem :D
i love it :)
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
I'm glad you do :3 I'm worried everytime I post if it will be unenjoyable XD
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:iconxiongirl:
xiongirl Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student Writer
:D
don't worry i feel the same way
but i know if they don't like it there must be at least one person who does like it
that is what keeps me posting lol
without it i would have stopped posting a long time ago
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
True true :3 But if you get a thousand good comments and one bad one, it's the bad one people ussually remember :)
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xiongirl Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student Writer
that is so true lol
it happens to me a lot
i get a few good ones and people tell me what they like about it
and then all of a sudden i have two or three people criticizing it to no end sometimes
i do tend to remember the bad better than the good
:D
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Yeah :) But that's why i say, if the majoyrity likes it and finds comfort in it, then the haters can be forgotten, cause if helping someone trought writing does indeed help them, then you have done a good deed and if someone think that it's shit and noone can relate and those who can is just so called emo kids, then they should learn that a problem is a problem, no matter how small, and it's also the small problems that makes the big problems :) If that makes sence XD XD Sorry just rambeling XD XD
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xiongirl Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Writer
lol it is ok you make sense
and trust me i ramble to lol
and i agree with all of the above
haters are going to hate
and lovers are going to love
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
Yeah true :D And that keeps me posting :D
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Banditgirl Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrlytearplz:

btw: *sweet, not *sweat ;D

if it smells like sweat I don't really want to go near it XD
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
... I HAVE BEEN SWEATING TODAY I GOT A FUCKING REASON?!?!? XD XD XD
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Banditgirl Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LMAO
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Kin-slayer-gorth Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
this is how I want to die
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
But let's wait a long time for that day yeah? :)
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:iconkin-slayer-gorth:
Kin-slayer-gorth Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
its all up to the hands of fate and mother
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
True true :)
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:iconkin-slayer-gorth:
Kin-slayer-gorth Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
yes may mother Lilith bless you
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
Thanks :)
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Kin-slayer-gorth Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
yes enlightened one
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the-soulseeker-vio Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
not a normal, cliche love poem with a rose base.... I love it! :love:
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
YAY glad you liked it :DDD :33
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aliforever331 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It has a classical feeling but I adore it anyway :) Simple but powerful I love it.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
In all honesty, in poems and at times in music, classical is what I prefer :) :3 Thanks, glad you liked it :DD :33
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aliforever331 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Same :) and Your welcome :D
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