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Please, don't
You don't realize
What will happen if you do
You speak to thousands
But you listen to no one else

Please, don't
Cut that wrist again
What pain you cause me
You scream for help
But you do not accept it

Please, don't
Don't make me
Build you your coffin
I don't want to paint you
With my misery tears

Please don't
Don't do it
Life has so much more
To offer you
Just give it time
And times a bitch
But happiness will come
And trust me, it's worth the wait
Ah, this one was emotionally hard for me to write, it's some thought I had when my friend, ended his life to put it that way, it wasn't too fun to write, but I needed it, and I loved the outcome :)

Update: Oh god this made it to the front page! :D HECK YEAH! :D Thanks to everyone who viewed, favorited and commented, means a lot :D
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ArcoIris-Gato Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh nonononononnononoooo, this is too sad '>< :heart:
Now I'm starting to cry, damnit :(
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
You felt the emotion atleast :) :D
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ArcoIris-Gato Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess ><
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
life is amazing and this was an amazing poem
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ASmallDaisy Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Time is quite a bitch isn't it? Ha.
Good writing. I needed to read something like this.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
I'm glad, one of the reasons I write now is to help people find words that expresses their feelings inside :)
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NumberVII2 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Its a very good poem.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Thanks :)
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NumberVII2 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome
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usagi323 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
:iconcryforeverplz: So beautiful.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Thanks :D
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usagi323 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
My pleasure!
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AngelYuNarukami Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
So sad but very well written with a strong message. Great job!
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Thanks means a lot :D
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:iconangelyunarukami:
AngelYuNarukami Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
You're welcome! :meow:
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Btw I love your profile pic :3
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AngelYuNarukami Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Oh thank you! ^_^
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jyoujo Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Photographer
therapist and psychiatric people find cutting yourself a scream for help ..
for one to notice but , i don't see quite like this .
i am in a group of young potential suicidal kids .
and i believe that even if you cut yourself for people to see ,
cause most of them do , and also most of the too cut themselves to
control the pain outside cause they can't control the pain on the inside .
so they choose to control at least one and also to make the inside pain goes away
for a moment . and for the healing there is another things or two write about .

anyways , i see how that would had been hard to write about .
be well .

and if you ever want to talk .
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
I'm getting better so I really don't need to talk about it, I got someone special to me that I know will listen, also my poetry helps me express myself :) And I hope you will get better >-<
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TiaTitan Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad, but so well written.
I particularly love the lines, "and time's a bitch/but happiness will come/and trust me, it's worth the wait"
Love those lines! <3
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
I'm glad you liked it :D
And those are my fave in this to be honest XD
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TiaTitan Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
Would you mind, actually, if I make that my signature for the time being? I will give you creds!
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
IF you gimme credits then sure XD
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TiaTitan Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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midnightrayne91 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I thought this was painfully beautiful. Each verse rings true and hits a chord. I thank you for sharing it with us. Sorry to hear about your friend. At least you can breathe easy knowing hes not suffering, now you must take care of yourself.

Stay strong.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
I'm glad you liked it :) And I have never been stronger :D
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midnightrayne91 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad to hear it =)
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i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Time is the most valuable thing you have >_<
And so many people are like that sadly...they call out for help, but don't accept any, because they feel as though people are looking down on them...
It's sad to heard that your friend did that. I hope you are ok...
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
Yes indeed, if lost, can never be found, and if you look, you lose more :)

And I know, I wish they would heal in a way >-<
And it happend awhile ago, im fine now but, at the time it happend I kinda, did things i regret lets put it like that :)
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i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student General Artist
True

And regret can be one of the hardest things to live with, but you have to forgive yourself so you can move on. Otherwise your yesterday will be screaming at you and your tomorrow is ignored...
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
I have three stages of forgiveness, first from anything spiritual ( if you do have one ofc XD ) Then from the person you hurt or did it to, and then to yourself, I havent done the secound, and if they dont forgive me, then i can't, not cause i dont want to, it's just that I can't >-<
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i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Similar here, hahah. You gotta forgive yourself and others. Many times, you just have to forgive and let go because you're the only one that's left hurting over an old matter. It's hard, I know, but necessary.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
It's the other way around, them forgiving me XD
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i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Ahhh I see, but stillll.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Can't live in the past I know but I can't have a good future if I can't accept my past and so on, the agruments go back and forth but in the end the dissusion doen't solve anything, and for the time being I can't solve anything sooooooo O.o
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