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Please, don't
You don't realize
What will happen if you do
You speak to thousands
But you listen to no one else

Please, don't
Cut that wrist again
What pain you cause me
You scream for help
But you do not accept it

Please, don't
Don't make me
Build you your coffin
I don't want to paint you
With my misery tears

Please don't
Don't do it
Life has so much more
To offer you
Just give it time
And times a bitch
But happiness will come
And trust me, it's worth the wait
Ah, this one was emotionally hard for me to write, it's some thought I had when my friend, ended his life to put it that way, it wasn't too fun to write, but I needed it, and I loved the outcome :)

Update: Oh god this made it to the front page! :D HECK YEAH! :D Thanks to everyone who viewed, favorited and commented, means a lot :D
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ArcoIris-Gato Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh nonononononnononoooo, this is too sad '>< :heart:
Now I'm starting to cry, damnit :(
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
You felt the emotion atleast :) :D
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ArcoIris-Gato Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess ><
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
life is amazing and this was an amazing poem
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ASmallDaisy Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Time is quite a bitch isn't it? Ha.
Good writing. I needed to read something like this.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
I'm glad, one of the reasons I write now is to help people find words that expresses their feelings inside :)
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NumberVII2 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Its a very good poem.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Thanks :)
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NumberVII2 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome
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usagi323 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
:iconcryforeverplz: So beautiful.
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