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If you can't face my lies
Then how will you accept the truth?
if you can't open your eyes
Then how can you claim to see through?
If you can't understand me
Then why do you even bother?
I make it as simple as I can
But you just can't get it
I wrote this and kinda liked it :D Hope you do :3
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
lov e it
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Lady-Chan101 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Ah your poetry. WHY IS IT SO GOOD!!
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
Lol thanks :3
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Lady-Chan101 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Student Interface Designer
You're welcome~!
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
Neat and true :)
But I do think the first line is slightly confusing, or perhaps it is just the way it is formulated. Like, ofc it is hard to "face" peoples lies when obviously you don't know about them. I don't know if you mean "lies" as in some of your dark sides, in that case you should go for something more like that instead of the word lies.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
I meant lies as the word lies :) No hidden meaning in it :3
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
.. uhm. I'm confused now D: haha XD
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
:3 Think :3 nothing more i can say XD
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
But thw words lies, that's the same I said? Like, how could anyone face lies, when you often don't know about lies??
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
At times you lie to people so they wont have to face the truth, you make a small lie to make them feel better :) That's the lie I used here :)
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