Using wallpapers other than wallpapers is wrong. So, there is a copyright issue in that. Just wanted to let you know.
Also, I think it's wrong of you to assume that if you don't see a copyright symbol, that it's automatically OK to use a photo because that is not the case. Here is a link to give you better understanding: [link]
When it comes to photos, when in doubt, assume it’s subject to copyright and don’t use it without the appropriate permission.
To be honest, I'm really tired of you using other people's work to get attention. Make your own photos or something. It's really disrespectful and unethical. And yet, you try to find ways to get around the "copyright" issue (such as saying "its a free for all because I didn't see a copyright" or "it's a wallpaper, so it's a free for all". Enough with the "free for all" nonsense.
Please, don't be so ignorant. People will start to lose respect for you for not respecting others works.
I'm still slightly jarred by the number of views on this 'poem', perhaps there is something missing that I'm not aware of .... however, I would have to agree with the general consensus here... it's very bland and has an 'anyone could have wrote this' vibe, I enjoy poems that are somewhat melodic when you read them... this is a series of short jabs, doesn't flow well nor read well, in my opinion. Sort of mediocre for its' # of views. The photograph however is ancient, it's probably been floating around the internet now for a decade.
I think more thought, etcetera and etcetera could have gone into this poem. The poem in no way described the heart or even hinted about it in any way. It dully reads as someone merely opening a gate and getting deeply lost. This is very cliché, perhaps, too cliché with the concept of 'if you enter you may not return/find your way/get lost' thing.
This could have had more potential. I want to know MORE. You should never have to make up for the difference of what is missing in a poem by writing the missing piece(s) in your Artist's Comment. This further shows it needs work.
Thanks for the feedback! I will try to write longer in the future, but I have a problem with that for the moment Also I want to add, that when I write a poem I also want other people to put THEIR story into it and feel like: I have felt this way. That's why I didn't hint to a heart in the poem, I did say my story in the description and others might put their story in it