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There are places so dark
That we can't see
There are places so dark
That we feel lonely

There are whispers in the dark
That makes our ears bleed
There are whispers in the dark
That makes us scared

As the darkness surrounds us
We look for a light
As the darkness embraces us
We start to fight

We don't want to live a life
In the dark
We don't want to live a life
In the shadows

As we look for a source of light
We realize
As we look for a small hope
We understand

There is always someone there
Even when it's dark
There is always someone there
Who will ignite your spark

You're never alone
Even in the dark
You're never alone
Not even in your heart

In the darkness we find light
But we forget who helped us in the start
In the darkness we find our fright
But we never forget how it fell apart

We live in shadows to hide for ourselves
Cause we know that deep within us
Is something we do not want someone else to see
A monster of a kind, something that's not really you
But it will always be a part of you

But even at the darkest moments
Even when the monster is closer than ever
There is always a light ready
You just have to stretch your arm
And reach for it
This came to me today and I wrote it down XD It seemed never ending, but I really LOVE the outcome :D The best one I have written in a long while :D

A small story here :3 I went to see the new spiderman movie: The Amazing Spiderman I think it's called, and in a way, I remembered this poem. Cause in the movie, comes bad times, and good times, and you notice that a hero starts to grown, not only in spiderman, but also in the civilazation. Like they got a role model in a way, and they found the currage to help him. That's when I thought and realized, as much as there is a monster in us, there is always a hero, waiting to come out, waiting to help, and that hero is always inside us, the monster may take the upper hand but the hero is there, and he or she fights to help you! :D Humans are bad nor good, a person is bad nor good, people are who they want to be, but some are closer to their monster, than to their hero :)

Sorry for that long thing xD XD I just thought it was words someone might enjoy and smile to, maybe give them some hope :) In the end that's what makes us all go, a hope for something, and I could continue for AGES but I will stop it here XD Have a nice day people :D Hope you enjoyed :D
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FallingStarXIV Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
Light in the Darkness, something good to remember. :)
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
Yesh indeed :D
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WolfAiki Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
We must always remember that the light is still there, even if we think it has gone out.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Yeah :D I agree :3
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the ryme scheme is great. A very good message as well. Really nice job.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Thanks :33
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime :)
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Crystal-the-CC Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
The second and seventh stanza reminded me of Whispers in the Dark by Skillet. Very nice poem :D
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
I like that song :D Thank yah :3
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Crystal-the-CC Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome :)
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
i understand it's really amazing and i want find the light to see what i'm looking for so thank you
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
Let the light come to you, you must look, but not to much :)
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
awww thank you so much your a true friend
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
omg that is really good great job i really love it
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
Glad yah like it :3
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
no prob :D
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
Great poem!!!
And The Amazing Spiderman is awesome :D
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
It is it is :3 Btw do you know Newtons secound law? XD XD
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Yeah why? XD
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Forget it I found out XD
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Lol would you've asked me? XD
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Yeah XD
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Hahaha xD
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Banditgirl Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good job! I think this is one of your best poems yet! :la:
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
Lol thanks Bandit :333
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Banditgirl Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NP!~ :iconshaplz:
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
Happy face :D
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Banditgirl Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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