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I'm so tired of being here
I'm trapped by all my fears
I wish you could see me now
Broken and crying for help
My blood it flows
And I don't want it to stop

I'm so tired of being here
I'm trapped by all my fears
I wish I could heal myself
Wipe all these tears away
But my heart it bleeds
And I don't know how to stop the blood

I'm so sick of being hurt
I'm trapped in my own mind
I wish I could hear those songs
But then I remember you
And I now I cry again
God why can't I be a man?

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I wrote this ALONG time ago, I fixed some parts, found it okay and though: Hey, why not post it? XD

Anyway, here is where I found the picture [link] :)

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*ignorantangel Mar 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Love it! Feel this way all the time. I wish sleep were eternal, that way i wouldn't have to face reality.
Makes me think of your poem "I'm Fine". I read the blog where you got the pic, it was very interesting, and I loved it.
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:iconfunshinerainbow:
"I wish you could see me now" - I've feel that way often, and I feel selfish for it, which reminds me of your "I'm Fine" poem (sorry if I got the title wrong).
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:iconmeandor117:
You didn'tt get the title wrong :) Glad you felt the emotion :D
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:iconfunshinerainbow:
Thank you. Your poetry is very easy to understand and connect to. :)
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:iconmeandor117:
One of the reasons I write it simple :D
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:iconfunshinerainbow:
Why else do you write it simple?
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:iconmeandor117:
Because my emotions are simple and I write about my emotions, also It's hard for me to work over and over with one poem i guess XD
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!luvserenity000 Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
nice
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