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I have never quite forgiven myself
I have never felt like I deserve better
I have never felt so depressed
And I guess I have never felt love

I have never had a smaller hope
I have never had so much faith
I have never cried so many times
And I guess I have never felt so lost

I have never ever been so thoughtful
I have never in my dreams grinded so wide
I have never lost my faith in you
But I guess, that's why it hurts
Wrote this a while ago XD I feel like my new poems ain't that great so I'm woking on getting better at writing poetry ftm ^^ So I found this older one which I liked :D

[link] Thaaa linkkkkkk to tha pictureee :D
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:iconalienrock:
AlienRock Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
I have never...
felt closer to someone
than I do to you
right now, Alise.
Peace,
Ric
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
LOL :D Glad yah liked it :D
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DrawDesign Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Short, sad, simple. Everyone's been there and back again from time to time. I love it.
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LadyxXxBug Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
Love this :3
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
I'm glad :3 For the fact that you loved it :3
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LadyxXxBug Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
:nod:
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Darkthrop Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
wow.....great:)
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
Thank you :3
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
its good
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:iconimflowers:
imflowers Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Very touching. The photo I mean.
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
I'm glad :D
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TheRainGirl Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is my avatar picture! :happybounce: Such a coincidence! I love your poem so much! :squee: Beautiful!
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Thank you :D
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ShugarSketch Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
"I have never ever in my dreams GRINDED so wide"


Even without the typo this is absolutely mediocre.
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Ahhhh XD I will check it and fix it ^^ Thank you :D
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SuicideNoteXIII Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
he
said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
he
said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and
............once
again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f......ace the...
... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said.... You're not pretty
you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
♥♥ ~~THE END~~ ♥♥.......Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15
pages in 15 minutes, you're safe.
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KuchikiYorume Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll never have a relationship to have problems with in the first place. So even if these things had any truth to them, it wouldn't affect me at all. D<
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ShugarSketch Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
:iconchainfailplz:
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SuicideNoteXIII Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol ikr XDDD;;
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x-MokoLatte-x Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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LiNgErInGdIsAsTeR Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is awesome :D *adds to faves*
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
YAYSS :D
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Gentleman-Status Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
Lovely piece! ^_^ I know these emotions rather well. Too well.
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
I hope stuff is going you way :)
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Gentleman-Status Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Thank you. :) And for you, as well.
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:iconrob96:
Rob96 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wowwww!!!! T-T
Fav!!!
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
YAY :D
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dagget0 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I can relate to this so much awesome job
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
I'm glad that you liked it :D ANd i hope stuff is going you way now :D
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dagget0 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
nope not really lol
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
It will get better dude :) JUst give it some time :D
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LilMissPeppy Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is like beyond recognition. Do you get any praise whatsoever for this in real life?
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Nope, not at all xD Noone from where i live reads my poetry, nor many knows :D
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:iconnos22:
nos22 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that's cool!! l like it! i wanna read more! :)
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Then check out mah gallery :DD
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:iconsalika99:
Salika99 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student General Artist
It's very beautiful in a sad way. Just pure awesome :D
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
I'm really glad that you liked it :D
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:iconzachary1991:
Zachary1991 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
Very well done.
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Thank youu :D
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Myennaius13 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
There are more than a few cases where the most prized and beautiful poetry is shorter and even simpler than your work here. I for one think it's on a level that deserves some sort of publication; it's incredible, simple as that.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
I'm glad :D And maybeh I will try to send some stuff to a publisher maybe, just a though XD
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:iconmodestdarkness:
modestDarkness Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
You should never have feelings for anyone, unless you really love them.
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Maybe that's true, but in the end, it's hard to reach :)
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:iconjohnmz:
Johnmz Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
Incredibly beautiful ! I think i have felt that...
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
I hope stuff goes better now :)
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BlacksmithofAngels Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow, kind of living that now.... great work
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
I hope stuff will go better, I'm here for you if you need antone :3
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snakebite16 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Absolutely lovely
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Thank you ^^
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:iconsnakebite16:
snakebite16 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome
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