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My tears, they won't dry for awhile
My blood, it will flow for some time
My fears, they keep me alive
But in the end
This is the real me
Not the portrait you once knew
I have changed, and so have you
Wow this one is old XD VERY OLD XD I read it and liked it :) I though it was good :3

Here is where I found the picture, I have asked so I can use it don't worry :D [link]
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:icondomosushiluver:
DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
aw so sweet and sad
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Axlazu Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Loved this.....just everything about it, loved it.
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AssassinLenna Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome :)
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JennyMachete Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This totally speaks for me. exactly how i feel. :iconomgsocuteplz:
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:iconseconddante:
SecondDante Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Very lovely.
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:iconvampiresaredifferent:
yeah but its true
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:iconthingg:
THINGG Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
this is so sad :'(
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:iconrobert414:
Robert414 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
I believe
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:icontouchofwishery:
TouchOfWishery Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
Very beautiful <3
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:iconpurestarnight:
PureStarNight Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Awwwww
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:icongeecatart:
Geecatart Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Student General Artist
loveeeee it :heart:
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:iconnekoxkurai:
NekoxKurai Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
absolutely love this
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:iconespioartwork31:
EspioArtwork31 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
Reminds me of a 2009 Campaign Ad a long time ago in the During the Spring
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:iconelninja:
elninja Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Student Photographer
To be honest-- not a huge fan of this one, kind of too short and simple for me...
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vegar1712 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
nice one :OOOO
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chocolatepanda6 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is really inspiring.
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PerfectByNature-SW Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
My favorite part has to be the last two sentences :aww: They sound really good when you say them loud, it's very inspirational
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neurotype Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Straightforwardness is great but the rhythm is uncomfortable.
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:iconmystryon:
mystryon Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
I like it too.
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celestial-elevator Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
When someone says "you've changed", it simply means you've stopped living your life their way.
- A quote I found on Facebook, don't know who said it, but it's true isn't it? I came to think of it when I read your poem. Keep being real.
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Daddydgk Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
You always amaze me with these. I love it.
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
I'm glad :3
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Nebulous62 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
very honest and moving. good work! :clap:
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XJNG Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the bluntness, but try to shy away from cliched phrases such as 'this is the real me'.
Also, in this case 'awhile' needs to be split into 'a while' since it's an adverb.
The portrait is interesting.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
Oh thanks for the feedback :D
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XJNG Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob.
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GoldenWordsOfLies Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
Is that a photo of YOU? I like what you wrote, a lot! "Favoriting"! :-)
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
I gotta dissapoint you :) It's not of me :) Follow the link :D The one who took it was awesome :3
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:icongoldenwordsoflies:
GoldenWordsOfLies Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
I'm not disappointed at all!! Both the taker of the photo AND The Subject of the photo are GREAT! :-)
-John McKeag
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dontcolorinthelines Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like it. :)
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TerhuneLass Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist
Hmm - I like this quite a lot. One of the best points is how concise it is - it's a nice change from so many long-winded symbolic ones.
Wonderful theme and idea.
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Student Writer
I like it also, its nice
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
Goodie :3
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Student Writer
:smile:
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:iconmdbp:
mdbp Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Professional Photographer
People don't change, merely your vision on someone changes.
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
And sometimes they change :D BUt that's a matter of opinoin :)
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:icondeapoxen:
Deapoxen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
no offense but people do change, maybe you just dont see it or dont want to see it?
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Gangstapegasus Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
^^ i like
you have put a portion of my thoughts into a nifty little poem :3
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
Im glad you liked it :3
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