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I don't know
Why I'm still here
I don't know
Why I made it trough

I don't wonder
Because I know it's luck
I don't wonder
Because in the end it could have been me

But when this song plays
I know, that I want to stay
For a small hope, even if it's in vain
That's all I need, to smile
Even at the darkest times
In the end I wonder why I didn't end it to put it in a way, but when I heard a song, that reminded me of the beauty in life I remembered :) Something I worte and something I like :) If you are still here, then there is something keeping you here, you just have to find it and never let go of it :D
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:iconnightmeadow:
NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
What song? :D
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
I have noooo idea, wrote this sometime ago my friend XD
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
Awwww D: D: XD ...okay
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
[link] Maybe this XD XD Just maybe O,.,O I made a vampire like btw :#
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
Nice XD XD Ohwhat, a vampire? :33
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
Yes a vampire O,.,O :3 Cant you see? :O :3
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
Where what?! I'm confused D: D: D: T_T XD XD .. you mean the smiley? XD XD
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
YEAH XD The smiley XD
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Piotoru-san Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
So damn true...
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GreenTurtle666 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student General Artist
This is beautiful, and so corresponding to myself...
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Darkthrop Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
i need my iPod:)))
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
Lol why? XD
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Darkthrop Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
because i need to hear again the songs in it:D
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Internet-Major Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really pretty :-D!
I like the flow of the poem as a whole, and it's a lot of fun to read it out loud.
The only line that throws me off is the eighth verse. That may just be because it's a free-verse poem and I don't know how you yourself would read it, but it's lovely none-the-less.

Could I ask what the song is?
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
It's not a song :3
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Internet-Major Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
At the end of the poem you refer to a song do you not?
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
Not intentionally O.o If I do then it wasn't meant to be XD XD XD
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Internet-Major Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Read line 9.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
OH that, I do not remember, there are many songs that does remind me that life is beautifull, but I do not remember which one it was at that exsact moment :) Gotta dissapoint you mah friend :(
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AnimeAlyssa Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
I love it! :')
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Writer
Yah! very true! I love it!
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