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If you could see me now
You would know I'm not the same
But you won't give me a chance

I know I'm not perfect
You don't have to say it twice
But my imperfection is me

I can't be your knight
That armor is too heavy for me
You will find someone else, stronger and free

That person will be free
Until you corrupt him
With this idea of perfection

To be imperfect
Is the be perfect
That's how you're yourself

And didn't you always say
Be yourself?
Yeah, I couldn't be something my ex wanted, and if I changed into that person I wouldn't be me, and she always said that she loved me for who I'm but in reality she had this idea of a perfect boyfriend and that was one of the reason me and her fell apart........

BUt something burns down for another thing to bloom :) That's how life is and you do not learn that fire is hot, untill you burn yourself on it ^^
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fallrose Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
Nicely written, beautiful.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
I'm glad you liked it! :)
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Katragoness Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
From a girls perspective: often our view of perfect is just what our bf is. He (you) may think that we have this unrealistic view of you but in reality it's everything that you are that we find to be the "perfection" even if it's not actually perfect. A totally perfect guy would be.... well boring and dull. Just a two-cents from a girl who's been given the cold shoulder for being misunderstood and thought to have "unrealistic expectations" even though I knew the guy wasn't perfect. :/ So yeah...

beautiful piece though. :)
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Then we have different experiences cause if you knew my ex you would know that she didn't think I was even close XD She tried to change me everyday we were together, kinda funny when I think about it. I know not everyone's like that but I wrote from experience and well, that was my experience XD
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Katragoness Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aaah. Ok. :) I obviously don't know the whole story so that would make sense then. :P
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Paschmina Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
There is a song from Emil Bulls called 'Knight in Shining Armor', just have a look at it, if you like, because I really enjoy this song ^^
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frei76 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
I :heart: it!
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ancientfire33 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student Writer
Genius! :O
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Lol thanks :D
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Angel-of-Darkness859 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student General Artist
I really enjoyed this poem, I can certainly say I'm in that same boat right now
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