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That's the sound of the time bomb ticking away
When it is gone nothing will remain
So are you sure that you want to stay?
For that's the sound of my time bomb ticking away

Why does god want us to go through this pain?
And why do we bother if it's in vain
So why do I even want to stay?
Why does god want us to go through this pain?

I don't deserve you why can't you see?
You're better than someone like me
Why would you want even me?
I don't deserve you why can't you see?

Why should I take all of your shit?
There's a limit of what I can't take
Come on just give me sometime
Why should I take all of your shit?

That's the sound of my time bomb ticking away
When it is gone nothing will remain
So are you sure that you want to stay?
For that's the sound of my heartbeat beating away
Some thoughs that I put on the paper and for me it turned out like this :3 I do like it atleast and I do hope you did ^^
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student Writer
very nice
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therainbowsshadow Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I do love it; I can relate to this very much... :heart:
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zara-a-tryste Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Student Writer
This is incredible. Period.
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
It's really good ^^
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
I do hope so XD XD
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
Why? XD
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
I wanna improve :3
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
Well you're always good :3
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
XD For some i guess XD BUttttt I wanna grow :3 That's why I'm working on alot of poems at the same time XD XD Trying to improve them :3
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NightMeadow Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
Ahh, anyway I think you are then :D :3 - improving.
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