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I'm sick of you
leave me alone!
My head can't stop
Thinking about you

I'm sick of being down
Depressed and suicidal
My smile isn't always there
Stop haunting me!

I'm sick of your sweet voice
It rings in my head
When you played on my drums
Now I can't touch the sticks no more!

I wish I was perfect
The guy of your dreams
My bloody tears
They paint my cheeks

I wish I could hug you
And kiss your head
Tell you while you slept
I love for forever my dear

But those dreams
They are dead
I'm alone
And left for dead

My soul is evil
My heart is black
My eyes don't sparkle
And my wrists they bled

I wish my dreams wouldn't die
But after all these days
my heart its stabbed
And it won't heal completely

In fairytales
The dreams never leave
When the heroes are have dark times
They remember the dream and carry on

But now I see
Fairytales, They are fairytales
They can't be real
And the mermaid
She didn't kill herself
But I did, in my selfish greed
This is easily my longest poem ._. It's accually three poems I thought fit together and readjusted them and made them fit together like this :D And if you wonder about the mermaid, I have heard that in the fairytale, The Little Mermaid, in the original she killed herself O.o Sick I know, I doubt it to be honest but yeah, it fit in so i used it :D
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iliveasidream Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
This is silly.
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
wow this is really tense and amazing
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AngelWithLittleHands Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
WOW, it's breathtaking, i love it,
it's so wonderful
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
Ich been glad :3
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BleedingWind Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
poor poor ariel! why did you have to go?!!?!
great poem by the way
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
I don't know XD Original fairytales is supposed to be kinda.. sadish XD
Thanks :D
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BleedingWind Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
yea, i think i've read it. it actually was really depressing.
unlike the "and they all lived happily ever after except for Ursula" Disney version
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
Not into, THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTERRRRR, it's so unrealiztic ;-;
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BleedingWind Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
very true. if you think about it a lot of movies have very unrealistic endings.
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Banditgirl Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LITTLE MERMAID! Y U DIE!? :iconwhatdoesitmeanplz:
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