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Don't cry, I'm still alive
My body just died, I'm still alive
My spirit has moved on, to the skies
My body died, but I'm still alive

Tell dad, he was the best he could be
Tell mom, that I loved her more than I could see
Tell my siblings, that I will miss their laughs
Don't cry, I'm still alive

I just needed, one more cut
But that was more, than enough
I cut to deep in my wrist, now my body is drained
Please, Don't cry, I'm still alive

What I did, I left them behind
Now I'm with god, and his angels alike
But when I look down, I regret
I see all the pain, I have spread

Don't cry, I'm still alive
Don't cry, my funeral is just a goodbye
But it's not forever, for you will see
In heaven we will be joined, and that is a joy for me
I got inspired by this song: [link] And a tear I shed when I was in a forest, the teardrop just, lay on a leaf, as if it was fighting for its life :) That teardrop has helped me, maybe it's a small thing, but it made me realize that whatever you are, whatever you have done, there is something that will save you and keep you going :) Also, when I was a cutter, I was very close to my pulse one day, and that's when I asked myself: What are you doing? Think of everyone, do you want to leave them behind? After that I threw my razor and screamed, a chapter of my life I'm not proud of but I will be honest about it :)

[link] Here is the link for the picture :D Hope you like it :)
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Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That's so sad and beautiful written!
I'm still crying ^^'
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
I'm glad you like it :3
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i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazimg. The reptition really added to it~
I just went to a poetry slam yesterday, it was pretty awesome!
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Tatibear Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Artist
I-its really good.... crying? Me? What? Pshh... really liked it :3
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Lol XD Glad you liked it :D
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Tatibear Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Artist
Mhm Keep up the good work :3
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mehtab123 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
Nice
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xynpocari Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
..........................BWWWWAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! this made me cry....... :iconsadplz:
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
THen you felt the emotion I put in it :3 Almost cried myself while writing ^^
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Wurzelnator Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
nice
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