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Here I'm once again
Just checking if you're okay
It's a long time since I last saw you
And I know we're not friends

But even though
you want me gone
It's not that easy to leave
To be honest, you're a part of me

I hope you won't notice
That I've been here
If you do then I know you'll leave
But I love watching you, when I do I can't breath

Even if I'm dead to you
You're still on my mind
You used to be a part of me
And I'm sorry I can't let you go

I wonder what's the right thing
I wonder what to do
Maybe I should just stare at you
And you'll leave me breathless till I die
That moment when you miss someone who hates you and you just have to know if they're still alive >-< I dunno, but I really miss her for some reason...... well well I have days like this at times :)

After I wrote this poem I remembered two lines in a song that really fits how I feel and yeah XD I wanted to share them :) It's from the song: Breath by Breaking Benjamin ( Here's a link [link] )

The lines
You take the breath right out of me
You left a hole where my heart should be

Yeah XD Have a great day people!
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mydeviousmind Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist
It's beautiful! Reminded me of someone. So thank you. I needed that.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
I'm glad this still helps people :3
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Emo-Artist-Midnight Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Photographer
Vivid and beautiful! :3
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Thanks :)
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Emo-Artist-Midnight Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Photographer
No problem :D
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GeekGirl97 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
unfortunately, I relate a lot with your poem xDDD

which by the way is TOTALLY AWESOME and BEAUTIFUL :33

you're very talented ^^
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
It sucks when you relate to poems like these XD
Thanks btw :)
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GeekGirl97 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, SO. NOT. NICE. Hahahahaha xDDD

And you're welcome ^^
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:/ Know this feeling...
But! You know, maybe someday you'll get over it :) I'm sure an ex of mine hates me but it's beyond my control, y'know? If they no longer want to spend time with you, why spend time dwelling on them? You never know what you'll see once your eyes are open ♥ wish you the best of luck and happiness :)
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
My problem is that I have been like this for almost a year and it just keeps comming XD
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