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Alone
In the dark room
Made of my doubt
I pick up a piece
Of my broken heart

Sharp
I touch it
With my shaky finger tip
I feel it against me
I sigh and start think

Hurt
That's the word
It explains the feelings
The emotions
That I hide

Sins
The wrongs
That I have done
To god, mankind
And myself

Edges
They call to me
I know that I can't resist
I need this
I really do

Cut
I use the piece
Of my broken heart
And I cut my wrist
Hoping to never wake up
Again
This one came out of nowhere once again XD I started feeling down and I wrote down one word, Alone, then it just added on into this poem as you guys just read :)

I didn't know what to call it so I went with the name you guys see :3
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:iconi-am-tsukiko:
i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Those moments when you just write and look back at it and say, "I did that?"
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Yeah >_<
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:iconi-am-tsukiko:
i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Happens often...
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Felicia-Neko Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
deeply written.. nice :)
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
Thanks ^^
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falsewarrior Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You know you cnt die from cutting your wrist right?
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
If you take the wrist with the pulse in it then you can ;)
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:iconfalsewarrior:
falsewarrior Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really? I didn't know that.
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:iconmeandor117:
Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
One suggestion, don't try it :(
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:iconfalsewarrior:
falsewarrior Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why would I want to? I have people i care about
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