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Alone
In the dark room
Made of my doubt
I pick up a piece
Of my broken heart

Sharp
I touch it
With my shaky finger tip
I feel it against me
I sigh and start think

Hurt
That's the word
It explains the feelings
The emotions
That I hide

Sins
The wrongs
That I have done
To god, mankind
And myself

Edges
They call to me
I know that I can't resist
I need this
I really do

Cut
I use the piece
Of my broken heart
And I cut my wrist
Hoping to never wake up
Again
This one came out of nowhere once again XD I started feeling down and I wrote down one word, Alone, then it just added on into this poem as you guys just read :)

I didn't know what to call it so I went with the name you guys see :3
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i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Those moments when you just write and look back at it and say, "I did that?"
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Yeah >_<
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i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Happens often...
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Felicia-Neko Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
deeply written.. nice :)
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
Thanks ^^
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falsewarrior Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You know you cnt die from cutting your wrist right?
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
If you take the wrist with the pulse in it then you can ;)
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falsewarrior Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really? I didn't know that.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
One suggestion, don't try it :(
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falsewarrior Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why would I want to? I have people i care about
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
I duuno O.o
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wolfworld Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You can, it is possible, it depends on how deep the cut is and if you just leave the cut so that you lose all your blood. My friends dad accidently cut his wrist on some glass and he died.
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falsewarrior Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He may of just let it get infected. He probably didnt die of loss of blood.
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wolfworld Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No you're wrong, he fell through a glass window as he was drunk and he lost lost of blood and the people say that he had been tryig to get to the phone for help but due to being drunk and a DEEPLY cut wrist he died. He was found the next day, it wasnt time for infection.

All im saying is that its possible, so don't just assume it's not. My friends dad's case isnt the only case i know of.
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falsewarrior Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh ok. O_o
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wolfworld Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry...i guess i got a bit defensive about the subject. I didn't mean to take it out on you, sorry, just had some bad expereiences. Sorry.
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falsewarrior Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Its ok when I recall some things I don't like to talk about I usually keep quite about them and then do something related to the event to get it out of my system.
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