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A sweet kiss darling, that's all I need
A warm hug and your comforting words

A hard punch darling, that's all I need
A beating and the screaming makes my day

A dark corner darling, that's all I need
A place to hide away and be free

A sweet kiss darling, that's all I need
A word of sorrow and your cries for forgiveness
This is like, the first thing I wrote in my word document XD Worked on it for a long time and I like how it turned out :)
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marinapaige13 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Amazing... as usual....
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Devacious Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You can't use wallpapers besides wallpapers. I don't think you understand that point..

So, I believe you have to take it down :/
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WriteByNumbers Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow! Great take on abuse...although...nevermind.
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
Go on :3
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WriteByNumbers Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just the way you wrote it my first thought was "WTH? Is she a masochist!?" Then it hit me...:dummy: I just didn't want to type that....
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
Lol its okay :3 What did hit you? I wanna know :)
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WriteByNumbers Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think I already responded. :blush:
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student Writer
awesome as always
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ffishy21 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist
That is an awesome picture(:
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WolfAiki Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
I like how it turned out too
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Dreamart101 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student
It's amazing !!! nice work
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ThePyromaniacArtist Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Simply beautiful. c: :iconclapplz:
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AnimeAlyssa Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
Very beautiful! :heart:
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frei76 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
I like it, but you should correct the first "darling"... Don't hate me for this!
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
Why would I hate you for helping me? XD
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:iconfrei76:
frei76 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
Because I should not correct your work: my English sucks! Sorry :)
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Meandor117 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
Any correction in my poems is accepted :D I want to improve my grammar and also I want my poem to have good quality :) Thanks for pointing it out :3
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frei76 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
:)
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